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A WALK THAT WE WALKED!

Posted On: 19 Jul, 2011 Others में

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Sometimes I look back and see,
By google pics

How happy and gay were we
Bright moon and those twinkling stars
And the journey to the planet Mars
Those singing rivers and dancing trees
Those chirping birds and witty breeze
A walk that we walked holding  hands
A tie of belief and the train of bands
The promises and sayings that befell
Everything was moving extremely well
Came a Tsunami of broken dreams
And We were tested to extremes
The tears and the sorrow
became the gift of tomorrow
I am lost where are you
Oh Lord! give me some clue
Will life fall back to me
Shall I again see the love tree?

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surendr shukl bhramar5 के द्वारा
July 20, 2011

Nikhil ji very nice n touching luv story ..sure why not ..u must see the love bird and love tree ..may ur wishes come true …best of luck A walk that we walked holding hands A tie of belief and the train of बांड्स धन्यवाद निखिल जी कुछ अलग इस मंच पर यों तो हम हिंदी ही अधिक ….फिर भी बहुत अच्छा लगा … शुक्ल भ्रमर ५

    Nikhil के द्वारा
    July 20, 2011

    Thanks for your encouraging comments Shukla ji.

    Satchel के द्वारा
    July 12, 2016

    Th&8a#t217;s weird the only thing I can think of is to delete multiman and install it again and try to install the BDEMU2 again, sorry I wasn’t much help.

Shailesh Kumar Pandey के द्वारा
July 20, 2011

Respected Nilkhil ji, Thank you very much for sharing such a nice nice poem with us. I’m thinking about the answer of the suspicion expressed in the last line “Shall I again see the love tree?” that why not, you shall see the love tree again and forever. clouds may hide the sun for some time, but it’s sure that sun will tear out the cloud and come out with its ultimate brightness.

    Nikhil के द्वारा
    July 20, 2011

    Dear Shailesh Jee, You always come-up with encouraging words. It’s always good to have a friend like you who comprehends your each word. Thanks for being a special friend and mentor.

संदीप कौशिक के द्वारा
July 19, 2011

Touching lines…!! May your wishes come true !! God Bless Nikhil Bhai !! :)

    Nikhil के द्वारा
    July 20, 2011

    Thanks for wishing my wishes dear Sandeep. This is the first time i tried my hands in English. You all liked the fruit, I am overwhelmed.

nishamittal के द्वारा
July 19, 2011

certainly, your dreams will come true., my best wishes are always with you.nice poem.

    Nikhil के द्वारा
    July 19, 2011

    Respected Nisha jee, Thanks a lot for your kind words and blessings. It’s so wonderful to have your comments on my words.

manoranjanthakur के द्वारा
July 19, 2011

it’s really superb and outstanding

    Nikhil के द्वारा
    July 19, 2011

    Thanks for your encouraging words dear thakur jee.

    Sagi के द्वारा
    July 12, 2016

    It’s always a relief when someone with obvious exrsetipe answers. Thanks!


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